miércoles, 10 de agosto de 2016

Review

Hi English class

Today I have to review one of the classmate blogs and this is of: Cayetana Bustamante.
Her blog is named ‘fandabudetoga.blogspot.com’ and her headline is ‘_Cabeza de tunA_’, it has written 7 post since the class started.

Her page design have many colors and an image background with flowers, birds and different bugs; for writing the background is black and the text white and green. I think that the blog is really interesting by the kind of writing and the pictures that are in there.  All her post have an image, gif or video that they do to call attention and in total are twelve.

The post I chose is the last published, his headline says ‘My favorite Subject’ and have 278 words. It talk about a subject she like to study, why she choose these subject (geology), the inspiration and enthusiasm of his teacher -Rodrigo Rauld- for teach this science and his experience with the volcanoes and rocks.

I chose this post cause for me is interesting, funny and a topic that I really like too since I was a little child.
Now I’m leave to you the post and some corrections:

My favorite Subject
How are u Geo-readers?
Hope ur fine, cause I will wrote today about something u love... STUDY (jejej)
Have  u realized that when u like some subject it's easier take the notebooks and started reading? I think we are loosing (WW) the sense of study to learn something new and interesting, maybe cause we don't really questioning what we want and love do.
It's not easy decided which subject I prefer, I really like cultural geography (my humanistic face) but I think since I have Geology, in my first semester, I learned something that previously I had no idea. The teacher - Rodrigo Rauld- It's really enthusiastic and with a lot of energy to teach something he really love. Besides we had two field trips, one of them (and the first one) to Cajón del Maipo. It's was beautiful cause was the first time that I started seeing the landscapes with another eyes: understanding their processes and morphology. On the other hand, since I have memory I collected rocks... so now I could understand which kind of rock I have.
The volcanism it's also something that transtorned (WW) me, I remember when I was in school I spend a lot of my time searching on Youtube -I still doing it-  eruption of volcanos! Saw the lava flowing (even trought (WW) a screen) it's amazing sensation. And this year, for first (SM) in my life I arrived to the crater of one of the many volcanoes we have in Chile, The Chaitén volcano (that erupted in 2008).
I leave u this photo I found in a book, that in my opinion it's amazing cause shows the power of nature.

Few corrections are in brackets.

Regards!

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